Status Updates From To Win Her Love (Players, #1)

They're in NY. They live outside of Manhattan. A farmhouse? Tractors??? Do they live in Queens?? But Queens doesn't have that stuff either??? Ok, so maybe they live in Long Island. WHY WOULD U GO TO THE GYM IN MANHATTAN IF U LIVE IN LONG ISLAND? How long are these train commutes?? God this is really pissing me off. I hope they tell us where they're all living BC this def ain't the city I was born n raised in

I‘m on page one and I’m already annoyed with the writing. I fucking hate third person narrator.

I'm drawn into the book and I know most of my major players--ahem, characters, but their intentions are surprises! Proving to be an interesting story that I can't seem to read fast enough!