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The story begins then veers off to extensive histories of peripheral characters. Slugging through unimportant descriptions. “words tumble like ice..” “intelligent fingers” “ my legs cried rivulets of dirt”. The story would be better off as a novella. The only character i liked was Santos which had little to do with the story.
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