Status Updates From A Hunger Soft and Wild: A S...

maybe i was enjoying myself too much earlier, but i'm starting to notice some continuity issues in the narrative. one paragraph is sitting, next she's walking after roan, and then next paragraph she's standing again? could use another round of copyediting.

The audiobook is really nice, I like it when we have a narrator por each character’s POV, that being said the story needs a good editor because if I hear something described as “unreadable” I might break my phone.

Dude, what the fuck, the last line of chapter 32 is so fucked up, Moira wants me to die, wtf

Dude, the fact that Roan fell asleep thinking: "And for once, I don't fight the darkness. I sink into it willingly, with her warmth curled against me and the echo of her voice still soft in my ear." And that night Aria leaves, nahhhh this is making me want to cry, I was all giggly and stuff, now I'm gonna cry!!!