Status Updates From Loving a Vampire Is Total C...

It doesnt make sense how Celine doesnt find it suspicious and stalkerish whenever Zav shows up working wherever she goes - especially as a detective. Even though I know it's fiction, I cant seem to wrap my head around the absurdity of this fact. If her brain was switched on everything Zav's doing would be a red flag.

This is going to be a hard DNF. It’s not good. The writing is bad, it doesn’t read like it was edited at all, and the Chicago geography makes no sense.

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