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Jess
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I had to write out the rules for magic and historical context just to understand wtf was going on here. I don’t know how I would have done it, but word-vomiting the background through stilted dialogue and exposition wouldn’t be it. This is rough!
Hopefully it will settle into the story now. Please.
— 3 hours, 21 min ago
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Hopefully it will settle into the story now. Please.
Jess
is on page 18 of 432
Some bad exposition going on here. I would almost rather a straight info dump and just get right to the meat of the story and characters.
— 23 hours, 51 min ago
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