Status Updates From Fated (Captivated by Alphas...

Whoop whoop, we’ve actually got some plot development! So far it’s been 300 pages of possessive/growling by 3 x panther shifters over their mate who happens to be a member of staff. We’ve had several meals where they’ve been staring constantly at him whilst he’s trying to do his job. That’s it on the plot front, nothing else has happened. Oh, apart from their panthers yelling ‘MATE’ constantly….

I’m not too sure what has gone wrong here as this book, so far, is insanely repetitive, and this could have been easily resolved with some editing. Like I’m not a professional editor at all, just someone who loves to read, and I could easily knock this book down by 10% without trying.

We also have three panther shifters who annoyingly keep yelling ‘MINE/MATE/CLAIM’ like some demented leprechauns…