Status Updates From A Dawn of Onyx (The Sacred ...

WHY IS SHE SPEAKING IN A COUNCIL MEETING GIRL STFU

“He was too pretty. What a disaster.” I feel ya sister😂

GORL! I get it but come tf on, dudes CLEARLY treating u different from everybody else….lets figure out whyyyy

Oooop. Just got the ick a bit. Why is “nah” being used 🙃

I have no idea wtf is going on but we got a “who did this to you” 📣📣

“Which meant I was like some far off planet, shrouded in a lonely expanse of space. Or maybe a lone meteor, trying with all its might to work its way into orbit.”

I’m struggling with the main character’s sudden shift from infatuation to hatred toward the MMC, especially since he’s shown himself to be fair and merciful. While the writing is often beautifully descriptive, it can drag the pacing, and repeated references to past trauma make the plot feel more like dramatic moments strung together than fully developed character growth—though it still has potential.

They can talk to DRAGONS?!

“But I’d seen so little, the cactuses were blurred and vague —a cluttered constellation of books I’d read and stories I’d heard over the years.”

I long for the day when someone writes a female protagonist that isnt insufferable. So far, Arwen is not worth her name.