Status Updates From Hold Me Like a Grudge

La verdad no me esta encantando

There are so many moments in this that are slightly off. 'He nudges Caleb forward. Those inches of space melt away'. OK, if you nudge something its going further away from you right? Also if he nudges Caleb forward I would then understand that to be Caleb facing away. But they are facing eachother, coming closer together, so it should be 'He pulls Caleb forward', that would get their mouths closer together lol.

I felt like the sentences/grammar were maybe a little weird in the firsts chapter. But I have not had any other problems since and I am throughly enjoying it. Also the part that I stopped at is crazy (end of chapter 8). And I love Caleb so much, Asher too but y’know

sometimes the wording is a little awkward. i admire the chemistry between two MCs though.

I’m giving myself the gift of a DNF. I still count the book since I made it so far and I will be rating. What’s putting me over the edge is the pro wrestlers being sad at each other over fake matches where one wins and the other loses. No. Absurd.

There’s a lot of telling, not a lot of showing. I feel like we’re being told how Asher and Caleb think, but we’re not learning more about them?