Status Updates From Asperfell

The editor missed a few revisions.

Still pushing through. The concept is great but I feel like the writing is disjointed. Where it started with a huge info dump of the world in the beginning, now throughout the rest of the story things from the past keep coming up that add nothing to the story whatsoever. This definitely could have been shorter for the sake of a better flowing storyline.

ARC reading this. I'm almost halfway through and I am having such a hard time staying interested. The world is cool but the way the world building is done is not my favorite. Going to keep pushing through, I guess.