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I get what’s bothering me. there is no real chemistry btw the fmcs

I don’t know if I al convinced. all of it is off, the cat and mouse, the obsession, the attraction. it’s not well balanced and unfortunately if you are trying to write something in the vain of killing eve you got to measure up to the big guns and this feels like child’s play

this is fun. we are getting into the heart of the cat and mouse game and i’m intrigued to see how it’s gonna go. the book is giving killing eve to some degrees and I like that. the chemistry is here but the only thing « problem » is I can’t discern the fmcs…