Status Updates From Play Maker (Bar Down #2)

God, the narration of this spice scene is straight-up cringe.

FYI, Mac Rae and Nathaniel Ames is a definite talent mismatch. I'm so confused how this keeps happening in this industry. They keep putting, idk, TOS era William Shatner together with, say, Philip Seymour Hoffman. It just doesn't it's not that Shatner CAN'T act, but those actors aren't on par with each other, and belong in different movies.

We have a gazillion books with baby as a pet name, and definitely need more with honey. And I love hearing different terms of endearment going back and forth in bed. <3

Whoopsie daisy - they accidentally included Mac correcting himself on the pronunciation of "breathy". (The first time he said "breathe-y".) TBH I actually kind of enjoyed that post-error, compared to the usual error of accidentally including two basically identical takes.

This story is going nowhere and I am about to lose my patience. I understood what their problems were 10% into the book. I don’t need to keep hearing about it.

it's not insta-love nor insta-lust and when the characters finally start something together it's not insta-love but it's a shade of it?? something is too fast and this happened in the first book too. potentially lack of development and detail.