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Gab
is 8% done
why do the men always give the woman a nickname
nicknames are fucking bad
they're ALWAYS bad
stop writing fucking nicknames
"wild one" i am throwing up
— 1 hour, 35 min ago
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nicknames are fucking bad
they're ALWAYS bad
stop writing fucking nicknames
"wild one" i am throwing up
D. Schutz
is 75% done
Reid is vanilla, one dimensional. Vassa is insufferable and too defensive about everything
— 7 hours, 11 min ago
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D. Schutz
is 45% done
🤔 lots of telling, not enough showing in this book. The found family connections + the fights/conflicts between the MMC & FMC are manufactured out of nowhere. reader is left wondering if those were developed off page or why/ how! The romantic tension between the protagonists is shown on page, but not well developed. It’s like if this book was the sketch of a book but author didn’t care to develop it
— 12 hours, 22 min ago
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D. Schutz
is 40% done
Character development in this book is weak and plot predictable. Concept is good but the execution feel very forced and artificially manufactured- like if the author is following a recipe of how to write a romantasy
— 13 hours, 11 min ago
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