Status Updates From The Reality of Wanting Him ...

I cannot stop smiling while reading this book!

Blake and the chickens? Most precious thing ALWAYS!

Got bored, skimmed to the break-up, and now we're in the grovel/make-up section. I feel like whoever broke Blake's POV here lost steam or lost inspiration cause it's so lacking. So much tell and so little show, but that's seems to be the flow of the book aside from the beginning.

Also, 95% sure at least one of the authors writes gay fanfic. I'd bet money on it.

I feel like Blake's personality is very different from the beginning of the book? Some of it flows well with the story, but other parts feel kinda forced/unnatural. We're also about at the 70% mark where we typically get the argument and short break-up.

Henley mentioned 🕵🏾‍♀️ *suspicious*

This reads so info-dumpy. I need more dialogue and less "so this is what happened ".

I'm assuming both authors wrote a lot of fanfic. The prose just screams AO3 regular.