Status Updates From Willow Rose

The dialogs definitely don't work for me, they're not flowing at all, and not believable either.
Loved the reveal of the creature, timing really took me by surprise and its description reminded me of a terrifying Mononoke
However, I think the Windigo trope has been overdone in the last 20y, often badly, and many natives have raised their concerns/annoyance about it so...

Characterisation feels a bit stiff, but watching Twin Peaks definitely put me in the right mood for this!
I love not knowing how the horror will break fully through.

Writing's a bit basic
Not a fan of the over descriptive details (aka specifying the colour of every item of clothing)
The comet/elk thing is intriguing though!