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So many blatant little mistakes. Allie and Mr. Beecher are talking about Melonie’s ex and how they have no idea who he was, she never even told anyone his name. Then “He could even have changed his last name so we wouldn’t suspect a thing.” Why would it matter if he changed his name, when no one knows what it was? In between this, she put her picture on her flyers so anyone could find her from anywhere!

Whoever has been ghostwriting for Joanne Fluke also wrote this book. I’m so sad! Allie calls Rex and tells him she’s going for a walk and he says “Say hi to Carol” and they have a ridiculous conversation about how he knows where she’s going, exactly like the door knock pattern conversations in Joanne Fluke’s books. So disappointing!

She even defaults to calling a married woman Mrs.

Why does she keep correcting people who call her Mrs. to have them call her Ms. I get that's her preference but she's married now and took her husband's names, she might as well get comfortable with a majority of people calling her Mrs. Those who know and care with say Ms. but get over it when it's someone you'll hopefully rarely see.