Status Updates From Lavender Spike

Well… it got bad again

Man. It’s for the most part not even bad anymore, just incredibly boring. Maybe a 1.5-2 instead of a 1

Man this needed beta readers and an editor

I hate this

“… This has never happened before.” “…amid the depravity we see today.” I have never read anything this mechanical in my life. Genuinely terrible. I’m quite frustrated that this was what was recommended when I searched for Canadian Cyberpunk written in the last 2 years. Because it’s for school I have to finish it. But believe me this book will be gone the instant it’s done.

So far this is just bad. Badly written, badly conceptualized, the dialogue is downright awful. Hopefully there’s something redeeming here.

I think this is what evangelicals think happens if you see one (1) Target ad with a gay person in it