Status Updates From Apprentice (Guild Mage #1)

The POV shift is so f'n weird. It's like introduce your character properly plz. Is he a different race what does he look why is here. Tell small story and introduce. Without lore dumping a bunch of words at the same time as introducing your random character POV shift.

Off to a fine start. Very good writing and editing. Similar vibes as The Queen’s Poisoner, which is fantastic.