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there better be a crazy plot twist or reveal in the last 60 pages, otherwise i’m going to be annoyed

I finished 10% of it, and I couldn’t continue. This was my first ARC so I’m not sure if it’s just not been edited or what, but there is a serious lack of punctuation. It felt like run-on sentence after run-on sentence and no quotations when people were speaking. I couldn’t take it anymore.

i think i’ve predicted the plot already but ! hoping i’ll be pleasantly surprised

There is too much dialogue for there to be a lack of quotation marks.
Also, the sheer number of em-dashes are getting on my nerves. It's making me question things.