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Dierdra McGill
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The story is still good. But the formatting is getting frustrating.
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It really breaks up the flow of the story.
— Nov 24, 2025 10:24PM
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Dierdra McGill
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The word “said” is way over used. I read a lot and I’m not an author, but I know there are ways for dialogue to flow without needing that word so much !
Other than that small nit pick, very intriguing so far !
— Nov 24, 2025 01:28PM
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Other than that small nit pick, very intriguing so far !
