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TRISTAN AND OLLIE THIS IS WHAT THE PEOPLE (me) WANT

I do like how this is unraveling but I’m absolutely losing my marbles on how all the protagonists are this dumb about the bad guy

HATE MISCOMMUNICATION TROPE
HATEEEE
HATE WHENEVER IMPORTANT SHIT HAS YO BE DISCUSSED THAT ITS CONVENIENTLY ALWAYS INTERRUPTED

re read

I’m glad to be a writer who is constantly reading and studying and learning from other people’s work. Whether I enjoy their stories or not.

Don’t get me wrong. I’m having a ball over here, I’m very entertained.

But it’s a firm reminder when I read these things that though I enjoy romantasy, I don’t like the baggage that comes along with these stereotypical romance plots

THIS IS THE REMIX TO IGNITION
HOT AND FRESH OUT THE KITCHEN

ALSO frustrating that the villains are being extremely sloppy and yet the mcs are not picking up on a thing

frustrating that the only thing preventing them from being together is themselves

besotted losers are MY TYPE

Ok it’s definitely gotten way better! I still feel like we didn’t need 300 pages of building though. Either way I stuck it out and I can’t wait to see how this one ends!