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this book had a lot of potential but the writing threw me off, almost feels like it missed the proofreading and editing process somehow? some of those sentences sometimes felt like they were coming out of a badly written wattpad fanfic... i couldn't even focus on the story
sucks because i was really looking forward to it!! i might get back to it later, maybe if it gets edited (which i really hope it does)

Just finished chapter 37 and the author switches POV mid paragraph without any indication that it’s happening. Not the biggest deal but I’m surprised no one caught it before it published.

Aside from that, the Prince is a totally prick. And arrogant in the way I don’t love. I don’t think he’s end game anyway but I hate how she still entertains the idea of him despite him being a jerk.

“I will shine for her, I will kill for her. And. I. Will. Bring. Carnage, for him.”