Status Updates From The Shades of Pemberley

I like the plot so far, but the repetition and lack of proofreading is very frustrating.

Lady Catherine has finally left Pemberley, but I lost count of the number of times that Darcy told her that he would force her to leave if she insulted Elizabeth ONE MORE TIME. He threatened this at least five times, but she kept making offensive comments without him following through. Sigh.