Status Updates From The Secret of Excalibur (Ex...

The concept is wonderful. I was intrigued and blown away by the entire idea behind the story, but any book that contains three ly adverbs in one sentence over and over again needs some severe editing. The heroine doesn't walk, she glides every where. This created a vision of her floating. The idea that a lesbian would change overnight is ridiculous. It doesn't happen. A few of the sex scenes where unnecessary.