Status Updates From Red Zone Realizations (Hous...

This writing is… not good. It feels like the author thinks her readers are idiots and everything is being explained. It’s giving Wattpad writing from when I was like 12. “I got out the car. I grabbed my keys, water bottle, and purse. I walked to the front of the house and opened the door.” (That isn’t a paragraph from the book). Just paragraphs of that kind of writing. I’m dying here!!!