Status Updates From The Amendments

I was confused on whether this writing style was intentional but now I think it might just be poor writing. I wish it was a lot more showing not telling. It feels very lecturey and then it remembers that it’s supposed to be a character and gets vague again. Idk. It’s a pity because it’s a really interesting premise with really important ideas. Just could do with a bit more subtlety :P

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Nearly done, it lost be but it’s getting me back. I’m not sure if the narrative style fully works though but everything is coming together beautifully… it’s really good for the most part

okay so much talk about the woman’s lib movement I keep thinking about the lecky 😔

This has 5 star read potential at this point