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She's trying to do too much. Like sub plots are fine but we don't need 15 that keep stacking and changing and you think one thing is something but oh wait, its not, hang on wait it is. Its too much. Simple plot lines with like maybe 2 or 3 subplots are fine, but this is too much. most of this book has just been exposition, enough is enough.

why is poppy in new york city 😑

Im sick, wtf is the new York realm allju about?? I. About done!! It is either fantasy realms or not, don't drag the whole statue of liberty thing into this series.