Status Updates From A Necessary Cruelty: A grip...

1. computer generated voice annoying. cannot correctly pronounce words. pronounces different each time they are said. no emotion so you don’t know if characters having conversation or the author expressing thoughts in characters heads. 2. poor editing. in one sentence an object 9 ft up, two sentences later it’s 7 ft up. This is common throughout book.

Odd. Good story but it seems like the author couldn’t keep up with what they had written. Meaning things did not add up. One minute the main character was doing something at 7am and the she was at her next intended destination and it was 5:15am but she had been 3 other places, one being 2 hours away.