Status Updates From The Hunger of Her (Feeder T...

I honestly hope I’m wrong bc this book seems so freaking cool. I hope it’s just the writer naturally using a certain style/rhythm but everytime I pick this up it’s at the forefront of my mind.

I hope I’m wrong, honest to gods, bc I’ve been rlly enjoying this so far, but I’ve been noticing a weird rhythm to the way this is written. Each scene follows a very specific flow of excessive metaphor, ‘it’s not this, it’s this’, one word sentences in groups of 3s (in general there’s a lot of lists of 3s) genuinely getting more upset at the idea this could be written w/ Ai.

“I wasn’t born crying—I was born clenched… A clasped fist exiting her body, slick with blood and promise. I didn’t enter the world; I was expelled from it.”