Status Updates From Crowntide (Lightlark #4)

So... im scared of the ending.
Anyways.

..we're not seeing any villagers or citizens and their perspectives. You keep shouting "im a villian" but it's the most hollow thing.... who thinks you're a villian, no one that i can see.... also absolving you're self of guilt by looking into a pool of possibilities is BS. "Its inevitable" "we'll there were worse choices" no boo, you still need to take some accountability....

She seriously did 2 dinners, two hallway scenes back to back within a paragraph.... terrible pacing. And again, if a character wasn't on screen they ceased to exist. Oro disappeared again! Just days of no word, just assume he's fighting the rift.... where were the wildings in Nightshade, any starling except Cinder? What are they up to, do they even exist anymore? That's why the "but im a villian" keeps falling flat..