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The writing in certain scenes is a bit clumsy. It makes understanding what is actually happening difficult- it’s happened a few times now. It feels like the author knows what is happening but doesn’t know how to properly translate that to the reader- like we’re going from A to C and there’s information missing. Where did the wizard come from? Why is he here? Did he follow them? Why? He’s just there suddenly

We’ve reached ‘one bed’ trope levels 😞

While Alo is a fantastic character, Hollis still has the personality of a pencil shaving, but okay.