Status Updates From Nightshade and Oak

hmmmmmm

Ugh… I should DNF this… it’s so boring. Never thought a Goddess of Death could be so ordinary, boring, and lack reasonable brain cells.
the dialogue and narrative from our characters feels very juvenile and lame. Not the way I imagine a Goddess who’s lived thousands of years to sound. Especially one who collected souls… where’s her introspective? Where’s her musing? Where’s the dark gothic mood?

This is starting to lag a bit for me… just not engaging or capturing my attention like it did at first…

A goddess who becomes a human equals whiny! I get it she's never had aches, pains, limitations like humans do but goodness am I getting weary of it all. I realize it's about her emotional journey to understand why humans make the decisions they do or act in ways that may seem irrational. I know it will culminate into a lesson learned; but it's just a little bit painful right now.

you knowwww fantasy is always a struggle for me but i'm locking in 🔒