Status Updates From The Assassin Thief (The Sou...

Having a list of the names of Thief Magic and what each Magic does, would have been extremely helpful. I’m struggling to understand the different types of Magic just by the names. For example, what I think a Freedom-Thief does, is actually the complete opposite of what their power is.

Having this book in a bigger book form would have been helpful too, to make the map and font bigger.

I want to know who edited this book because it was really badly done. This whole monologue about why Telium likes her haladie could've been done when she was picking up the weapon at her cabin. It does not belong when she's about to fight someone.

The number of times words are repeated in this book irks me. Yes, I get it, Tenebris is a God and Telium really, really wants to snarl. Also, so far, I don't really care for Telium as a character. She's not really well characterized aside from being emo and constantly jabbering about the Queen.