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Madoka and Sayaka's friend is being brainwashed. Madoka did not make a contract yet with Kyubey yet so Madoka isnt able to help. I like the style of writing because it suggests many things to the reader and is vague to a good extent. I do not dislike any part of the writing.

Mami has just been killed because she was distracted by Homura how came to try and save her. Homura then proceeds to kill the witch and is gifted with a grief seed. In this timeline did Mami have to die? Was it to show that no matter which timeline Mami wont live.

Madoka and Homura finally got to meet Mami well again in a different timeline. Madoka still retains her memories compared to the other timelines previous to this one. If I could change one thing in the plot I would make it so Kyubey a small animal like creature does not retain his memories from prior timelines.