Status Updates From Red Star Rebels

Could not resist starting this one already :D But why is it so short? Ruuude, haha. I am loving it. <3 A little put out by some parts of the writing, but don’t mind too much :)

This improved a bit - time taken to flesh out setting and characters.

Yeah, this isn't doing it for me. It's YA? Okay, fine. But there's so little meat on the bones here for both the characters and the worldbuilding.