Status Updates From The Kingmaker: A M/M Mafia ...

I cannot comprehend how i got through this. So much repeating of the sentences plot lines fell flat and i felt like i was missing some link becuse why did his friends suddenly tlk abput his bf like they knew him. As if they had a conversation with emilio?? Please get an editor or something because this was so bad the story had potential but even that had big inconsistencies with the characters