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I think I'm going to stop reading at page 106. The writing is insufferable. Too many allusions. Like 3-4 allusions every 2 pages. And they're not good allusions. Her word choice is so unnatural. Sorry but no regular character would use to word "posit" with his 15 year old daughter. Not to mention "get her entrée to the house". Come on. Premise is fun. But even the pacing is all over the place.