Status Updates From Guardian’s Oath

I am grinning stupidly.... hehe.... Um. Don't judge.

Its simple and sweet. Me likes. And is too tired to continue. Good eve all.

Lets see if we can run this through tonight. Its late. But Im getting up late tomorrow anyways. May as well roll out a late night read.
Good for the soul I think.

Tali admitting to herself that she loves Gavin was sudden. Still some rough character POV changes and scene changes.

The scene transitions are a little choppy. Meaning the events flowing into each other

The two leads are repressing their chemistry so well that it almost isn’t there.