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I am so confused by this author's storytelling. One minute, I'm irritated because he skips a layup of a romantic scene that I wanted to see. The next, I am emotionally devastated by the line "You're buying the small cereal, Luke."

What a nothing burger this Boston trip turned out to be. The characters were set up perfectly for a romance novel worthy moment of support and connection for each other's professional goals at this conference and the author just... faded to black? I mean, I can live without a sex scene, but Luke not figuring out a way to skip a gym or video session in order to hear his man present? Unforgivable.

Okay, Wrench just has an economical way of writing. Now that I have relaxed into it a bit, I'm kind of into it.

Oh, no. I am less than a handful of pages into this book, and there's already been two instances where the author has forgotten a word that should be in the sentence. I go to his profile expecting to find that he's an amateur, but nope - his whole bio highlights his vast experience as an academic and published writer. 😬