Status Updates From Fractured Bonds: A why choo...

Alaric- asshole mage that didn’t even grovel. His excuses were absolute bullshit and raven just accepted it. I understand you had to hide certain things, but you were unnecessarily horrible when you didn’t even have to. And you still didn’t teach Raven anything but still made comments about her not controlling her magic

Zane- I absolutely love him! He’s an incubus that deserves better because he brings the entertainment.
Kai- the merman that rather just chill on the sidelines as a boring ass mmc with no backbone. The shyness ain’t cute when it’s not written correctly.
Ramsus- you’re not as badass because why do you keep getting knocked out. Would love to see you and Zane

Maverick- bear shifter that thinks hers the alpha by telling everyone what to do in an unattractive way. It just seems like he’s consistently parenting raven and thinking his relationship with her is more important than the rest. Telling her vampire mate when to feed and incubus when to have sex. I like that he cares about her needs but damnn you’re a little insufferable. But it’s also ravens fault.

Raven - no character development
She communicates like an idiot that even her familiar calls her dumb. I still don’t understand why Adam her guardian taught her absolutely nothing about the world. He could have still allowed her to know more about the different supernaturals or taught her how to defend herself