Status Updates From Study in Scarlett (The Iron...

What the hell is that writing style ?! I want to DNF it, but I also want to know what could still happen I guess.
The writing is just so horrible. It feels like there a sooo many missing pieces. It doesnt explain anything, I dont get anything because of it. The characters dont have any depth, their behavior doesnt make any sense.

The writing is horrible and I have no idea what is going on. I can tell the book has not been edited properly because I just read a repeated sentence.

So far this book is kind of confusing. I'm trying to understand each character but what I'm really trying to understand is what the world outside the Obsidian Marrow is like so I can better understand what's going on. I still have more to read so maybe my questions will be answered.