Status Updates From Fold Catastrophes

Critical Mass was fun. They’re all blurring together at this point but the glaring issues are the same throughout.

Defective - SF

Story 3 I think, alien snatching
Another weird start but I felt like I understood what was happening and simultaneously connected with the character over the medical community being unhelpful and gas lighting.

Story 2 - appears to be a letter to someone the narrator cares for but that wasn’t introduced at the beginning to the reader and appears in randomly interspersed segments, also same writing style as previous

Story 1 - would like more sensory information, the writing is very visually descriptive, action oriented, and dialogue driven
“Author’s Note” should be labeled