Status Updates From Arctic Bound (Arctic Wolves...

It's areas like this that hurt the story.
".....She hasn't yet tasted my blood. It's one-sided. There's been no blood exchanged. Only the giving of my blood. I've not tasted hers."
Blue pencil needed please. If the first part had been edited out, this would make sense. As it is, not so much.

Even there are some strange editing errors, I find myself drawn more and more into this story. I should be in bed, but I can't quit reading. Just have to read one more page. Or two. Maybe to the end of this chapter, or the next.

What is a sequenced halter-top? Perhaps they mean sequined?

Definitely has editing problems.