Status Updates From Saltswept (The Earthsalt Du...

I just think if you're going to do multiple povs that they're each distinct from each other.

im reading but all I can ask myself as I do is « what is the meaning of this ? » I don’t understand where we are going and the spicy scene thrown in was so weird of a choice. I love a fantasy book but this is so not refined and it almost look unedited…

I am reading but I feel nothing toward this. the craftsmanship is not really qualitative ngl. the timeline of the story is hazy, the plot itself is fragmented and now we have a potential romance being launched but it doesn’t work bc the whole ensemble is just so jagged

the potential is here. chapters are short and the story is picking up, I’m very interesting to see how the political commentary is gonna unfold and how intense it will turn out to be

navigating this story is getting better but I am not impressed by the storytelling at all. also the timeline is very blurry

ngl I quite confused so far. I don’t particularly enjoy the storytelling bc the way it’s done isn’t helping us ease into this world and the lore is established but I do not get it