Status Updates From You Should Have Been Nicer ...

(2) Also, what exactly was scandalous about Marisa? That she got scammed? Yes, she borrowed money and didn't pay it back, but again in the grand scheme of things, borrowing money and not repaying is not on the same level as what the others did. Again, unless I'm missing something, how is that an absolutely horrific, unforgivable thing to do?

(1) ok wait, yes cheating is bad, but was the relationship consensual? Did Ramon rape Julia and Naomi was the result of that? Or is she deadass equating him cheating on his wife to the actually bad shit that the other family members have done?

yeah the horror things, particularly the "gore", aren't very well-explained

"...wrapped in an identical cardigan to hers..."
I think this sentence should be reworded to say "...wrapped in a cardigan identical to hers"

oh brother why is Marcus even a character tbh

typo grammar/misspelling should be "meant" instead of "mean"

1. Ngl this is kinda slow. Like, yes the family drama is a big part of it but can something...else happen now?
2. I'm finding it difficult to gauge our MC. She's kind of flip floppy, and it really comes out when she tells us that she's practically been estranged from her family for years, and yet she's surprised when she doesn't know something about them.

Calling it: either Rafael and Julia were fooling around, or Rafael did something really bad to Naomi. It would explain why Yaritza doesn’t like Naomi, and why she’d be angry at her dad

"The demon can even mess with your memories if it's from long ago enough."
I feel like this sentence should be reworded to say "long enough ago."

girl why did you even pick up the phone? one, you don't like the dude, and two, you knew your cousin is a gossip.