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Naomi C
is 40% done
Okay, its not bad but there are many plot holes and much confusion. It feels like there are jumps in time that are needed context to understand things. Why is this person suddenly not upset with this other person anymore? Our main character that we are following is acting in ways that do not follow the context of the story and that is bugging me.
— Sep 02, 2026 10:43AM
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