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Unreliable ass narrator! Chick takes more trips than shaman.

2 things I don't like from a 1st person pov. The FMC references future outcomes in her inner nologue. Like 'If I'd only known someone else had me in their sights'. It just randomly goes omniscient for no reason. Also, yes I get this is a mystery, but we only get breadcrumbs of things she already knows as we read. So the reader is left solving the mystery of her past which she knows and her present which she doesn't.