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structurally this is v cool. i think it takes a certain skill to have very little concrete plot and still maintain emotionality through mood and atmosphere alone - esp with a somewhat detached narrator.
then and again, i do wonder if this would have been stronger as a short story? i think a lot about repetition and useful repetition these days, and not just reintroducing the idea but building on it again
— May 08, 2026 08:13PM
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then and again, i do wonder if this would have been stronger as a short story? i think a lot about repetition and useful repetition these days, and not just reintroducing the idea but building on it again














