Status Updates From Saturn Returning

“Jordan seemed to have a piece missing. Trace felt a desperation to fill that gap. She wanted to make Jordan whole again.”

I am having a hard time following the story with the third person writing. Also, I am normally fine with a back and forth timeline, but having it with three different characters is hard to keep track. I have to pause a lot and retract what I remember about each character. I feel like I should be taking notes.

Wow silvia can be very unbearable