Status Updates From Sweet Shots (Behind the Lens)

Very dancing in the beginning and one dimensional view of trauma being the reason for abuse.

Way to much sex and jarring transitions from chapter to chapter.

Chapter 2. so far, the writing is really superficial.

I don't usually notice continuity errorsbas I'm not a super picky reader but you can't make a point at the beginning that his favorite thing to do is read and then only a couple chapters later say he doesn't like to read bdcause of trauma from childhood.