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Elisabeth Nadler
is on page 157 of 249
Story was good; some flaws. Then things fell apart with consistency. Began as a 200 mile walk.
Day 1: Walked 25mi. "We need 30mi a day to make it" Says a guy "We travel at night"
Day 2: Walked 30mi. By day.
Day 3: Traveling by day again?
Day 5: Guy says they traveled 44mi in 5 days? Says they averaged 9mi. daily.
Day 6: FMC says 62mi left. Later MC says they just reached 63mi.
What?Math ain't mathing. Still reading.
— Jun 22, 2026 10:37AM
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Day 1: Walked 25mi. "We need 30mi a day to make it" Says a guy "We travel at night"
Day 2: Walked 30mi. By day.
Day 3: Traveling by day again?
Day 5: Guy says they traveled 44mi in 5 days? Says they averaged 9mi. daily.
Day 6: FMC says 62mi left. Later MC says they just reached 63mi.
What?Math ain't mathing. Still reading.
Elisabeth Nadler
is on page 37 of 249
Saw this when checking on my book's new release ranking. The cover & premise caught my attention. Totally my forte (former military man, tough woman, both struggling with past)
So far the story is decent. Despite my dislike of short choppy sentences, this author makes it work better than most. Characters are engaging & draw you in. Formatting could use work, mostly needing speech/thoughts separated from main text.
— Jun 18, 2026 07:16PM
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So far the story is decent. Despite my dislike of short choppy sentences, this author makes it work better than most. Characters are engaging & draw you in. Formatting could use work, mostly needing speech/thoughts separated from main text.